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Thursday, May 13, 2010

Alex's Recount Writing

Osama Bin Laden chase

Week 3, Bin Laden chase, June 9 1992.

This is week 3 of the Osama Bin Laden chase, we were under heavy fire by the Taliban at approximately 1300 hours. The day we got attacked was a brutal nightmare with 20 comrades dead and medics working like a colony of ants to save the wounded.



We are now leaving our camp in Afghanistan to our new camp in Iraq and we are sending our dead and wounded back to the US. in Iraq we will preform a counter attack against the Taliban. We have been unable to catch Osama Bin Laden because we are in his land and he knows the best hiding places in Iraq. He is a war criminal now he has got the US army on to him. So where ever he is hiding its a pretty good place.

4 comments:

  1. Alex you have used some great descriptive language in your writing like 'brutal nightmare'.

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  2. Nice work Dippy

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  4. very well done alex a good piece of reading!!

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